Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Snapshotland

Step 2.
1. Photoland
2. Magical land
3. Fairytale
4. Cartoon
Step 4.
1.
and smile and smile and smile
2
. It is the promised land
3. sandgirls
4. sandboys
5. permanent delight
Step 5.
1.gingham pinafores and bonnets on the sea-shore.
2. in deck-chairs on the beach
3. in old fashioned gardens with lavender and grandchildren here and there
4. smiling through the lavender and dolphins.
Step 6
smiling,delighted,happy(all of them describes happy people)
Step7
All of them are positive things. No negative things
Step8
I think the poem is describing a Photo.
Step 9
1. persona
2. to the public
3. happy
4. to better describe the picture without being very direct that it is describing a picture, not a scenario.
5. It made the poem clearer for me to understand it.

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  2. A good attempt to try to do the 10-steps to analyse the poem. However, I think that you can add more to your fourth question. I feel that you should add what type of special words these words are, such as alliteration or metaphor. That would allow your readers to understand why you had chosen the word. Anyway, its a good job! Keep it up!

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